From 41cb02b535ef4d555b4906477f0eea6999842cf0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: The0x539 Date: Thu, 29 Apr 2021 17:33:55 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Last-minute edits --- 03/YaibaBD_03 - Dialogue.ass | 2 +- 05/YaibaBD_05 - Dialogue.ass | 6 +++--- 08/YaibaBD_08 - Dialogue.ass | 2 +- 11/YaibaBD_11 - Dialogue.ass | 4 ++-- 12/YaibaBD_12 - Dialogue.ass | 4 ++-- 13/YaibaBD_13 - Dialogue.ass | 2 +- 18/YaibaBD_18 - Dialogue.ass | 4 ++-- 20/YaibaBD_20 - Dialogue.ass | 2 +- 22/YaibaBD_22 - Dialogue.ass | 2 +- 23/YaibaBD_23 - Dialogue.ass | 4 ++-- 24/YaibaBD_24 - Dialogue.ass | 4 ++-- 25/YaibaBD_25 - Dialogue.ass | 2 +- 26/YaibaBD_26 - Dialogue.ass | 4 ++-- 13 files changed, 21 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-) diff --git a/03/YaibaBD_03 - Dialogue.ass b/03/YaibaBD_03 - Dialogue.ass index 6aa6e88..c701cef 100644 --- a/03/YaibaBD_03 - Dialogue.ass +++ b/03/YaibaBD_03 - Dialogue.ass @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Dialogue: 10,0:02:20.91,0:02:27.50,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}However, their leader's Dialogue: 10,0:02:28.29,0:02:29.50,Default,,0,0,0,,Demons. Dialogue: 10,0:02:30.00,0:02:32.42,Default,,0,0,0,,Their staple food is man. Dialogue: 10,0:02:32.42,0:02:34.72,Default,,0,0,0,,They kill humans and feed on them. -Dialogue: 10,0:02:35.22,0:02:38.64,Default,,0,0,0,,The time and place of their origin is unknown.{### alt: It is unknown when and where they first appeared.} +Dialogue: 10,0:02:35.22,0:02:38.64,Default,,0,0,0,,It is unknown when and where they first appeared.{The time and place of their origin is unknown.} Dialogue: 10,0:02:38.64,0:02:43.43,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}Their bodies carry immense strength, \Nand their wounds mend in no time. Dialogue: 10,0:02:43.98,0:02:46.31,Default,,0,0,0,,Their mangled flesh regenerates, Dialogue: 10,0:02:46.31,0:02:49.69,Default,,0,0,0,,and their limbs can be regrown. diff --git a/05/YaibaBD_05 - Dialogue.ass b/05/YaibaBD_05 - Dialogue.ass index c6b3cda..59dba52 100644 --- a/05/YaibaBD_05 - Dialogue.ass +++ b/05/YaibaBD_05 - Dialogue.ass @@ -142,8 +142,8 @@ Dialogue: 10,0:13:32.25,0:13:33.67,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}I was naïve. Dialogue: 10,0:13:34.96,0:13:38.59,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}I couldn't so much as {\i0}speak{\i1} with a single demon. Dialogue: 10,0:13:39.72,0:13:42.30,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}They all just tried to kill me straight away. Dialogue: 10,0:13:43.09,0:13:45.68,Default,,0,0,0,,I'm so sorry, Nezuko. -Dialogue: 10,0:13:47.81,0:13:50.23,Default,,0,0,0,,I couldn't find a way -Dialogue: 10,0:13:51.89,0:13:53.81,Default,,0,0,0,,to make you human again.{### wryyy ordering} +Dialogue: 10,0:13:47.81,0:13:50.23,Default,,0,0,0,,I tried to find a way to make you human again, +Dialogue: 10,0:13:51.89,0:13:53.81,Default,,0,0,0,,but I'm coming back empty-handed. Dialogue: 10,0:13:59.69,0:14:01.61,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}Even my uniform feels heavy. Dialogue: 10,0:14:02.70,0:14:04.87,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}I want to get home as soon as possible, Dialogue: 10,0:14:05.45,0:14:07.12,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}but my whole body is aching. @@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ Dialogue: 10,0:16:21.25,0:16:26.38,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}Battling them will be a Dialogue: 10,0:16:27.55,0:16:32.30,Default,,0,0,0,,But I'm sure you'll manage just fine, Tanjirou. Dialogue: 10,0:16:33.76,0:16:34.68,Default,,0,0,0,,Right. Dialogue: 10,0:16:37.06,0:16:38.31,Default,,0,0,0,,Say... -Dialogue: 10,0:16:38.31,0:16:41.81,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}I think Nezuko's somehow different \Nfrom the other demons.{### I'm not sure why, but I really don't like when "somehow" is used in this particular fashion. it comes up occasionally. alt that's way too long: I think there's something about Nezuko that makes her different from the other demons.} +Dialogue: 10,0:16:38.31,0:16:41.81,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}I think there's something special \Nabout Nezuko compared to other demons. Dialogue: 10,0:16:42.06,0:16:45.57,Default,,0,0,0,,You think it could it be one of those {Blood }Art things? Dialogue: 10,0:16:45.57,0:16:48.70,Default,,0,0,0,,No, I don't think so. Dialogue: 10,0:16:48.70,0:16:51.99,Default,,0,0,0,,I wouldn't call that an example of a Blood Art. diff --git a/08/YaibaBD_08 - Dialogue.ass b/08/YaibaBD_08 - Dialogue.ass index 39bc442..d1375ce 100644 --- a/08/YaibaBD_08 - Dialogue.ass +++ b/08/YaibaBD_08 - Dialogue.ass @@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ Dialogue: 10,0:07:56.96,0:07:59.83,Default,,0,0,0,,Does it seem as if I'm at dea Dialogue: 10,0:08:00.33,0:08:02.63,Default,,0,0,0,,Do I look like I'm dying? Dialogue: 10,0:08:05.17,0:08:08.01,Default,,0,0,0,,Oh no, no, no, no. Dialogue: 10,0:08:08.76,0:08:13.22,Default,,0,0,0,,I'm a living being who's infinitely close to perfection. -Dialogue: 10,0:08:24.48,0:08:29.24,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}What do you think will happen \Nif I keep inundating you with my blood?{### "flood" rhymed which is bad} +Dialogue: 10,0:08:24.48,0:08:29.24,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}What do you think will happen \Nif I continue to inundate you with my blood?{### "flood" rhymed which is bad} Dialogue: 10,0:08:37.12,0:08:41.42,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}The human body cannot withstand \Nthe speed of transformation. Dialogue: 10,0:08:45.76,0:08:48.47,Default,,0,0,0,,Your cells will disintegrate. Dialogue: 10,0:09:08.07,0:09:14.16,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}Bring me the head of the demon hunter \Nwith the hanafuda earrings. diff --git a/11/YaibaBD_11 - Dialogue.ass b/11/YaibaBD_11 - Dialogue.ass index 9a1b392..2472b2d 100644 --- a/11/YaibaBD_11 - Dialogue.ass +++ b/11/YaibaBD_11 - Dialogue.ass @@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ Dialogue: 10,0:04:24.70,0:04:27.00,Default,,0,0,0,,Listen up! I'm gonna die soon Dialogue: 10,0:04:27.00,0:04:28.83,Default,,0,0,0,,My next mission will be my last! Dialogue: 10,0:04:28.83,0:04:31.46,Default,,0,0,0,,I'm a complete and total crybaby{wuss}, got it? Dialogue: 10,0:04:31.46,0:04:32.59,Default,,0,0,0,,A wimp like no other! -Dialogue: 10,0:04:32.59,0:04:35.71,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}You've gotta protect me \Nuntil I get married, y'hear me? +Dialogue: 10,0:04:32.59,0:04:35.71,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}You've gotta protect me \Nuntil I get married, 'kay? Dialogue: 10,0:04:36.42,0:04:38.42,Default,,0,0,0,,My name is Kamado Tanjirou! Dialogue: 10,0:04:38.42,0:04:40.13,Default,,0,0,0,,Is that so? My apologies! Dialogue: 10,0:04:40.13,0:04:42.09,Default,,0,0,0,,I'm Agatsuma Zenitsu! @@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ Dialogue: 10,0:05:04.95,0:05:07.58,Default,,0,0,0,,I was hoping I'd die during t Dialogue: 10,0:05:07.58,0:05:11.33,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}but since I was "fortunate" enough to survive, \NI'm {\i1}still{\i0} going through hell every day! Dialogue: 10,0:05:12.00,0:05:14.34,Default,,0,0,0,,I'm so scared! Scared! Scared! Beyond scared! Dialogue: 10,0:05:14.34,0:05:17.26,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}I just know some demon's gonna \Ngobble me up sooner or later! -Dialogue: 10,0:05:17.26,0:05:20.80,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}My brains are gonna get sucked out \Nthrough my ears while I'm still alive! +Dialogue: 10,0:05:17.26,0:05:20.80,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}My brains are gonna get guzzled out \Nthrough my ears while I'm still alive! Dialogue: 10,0:05:20.80,0:05:24.26,Default,,0,0,0,,No! God, no! Dialogue: 10,0:05:24.26,0:05:27.56,Default,,0,0,0,,Somebody, save me! Dialogue: 10,0:05:27.56,0:05:28.89,Default,,0,0,0,,What's the matter? diff --git a/12/YaibaBD_12 - Dialogue.ass b/12/YaibaBD_12 - Dialogue.ass index 5fea7eb..2979ca8 100644 --- a/12/YaibaBD_12 - Dialogue.ass +++ b/12/YaibaBD_12 - Dialogue.ass @@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ Dialogue: 10,0:02:57.12,0:02:58.99,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}Why's he coming after me Dialogue: 10,0:02:58.99,0:03:00.74,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}Isn't he a Demon Slayer? Dialogue: 10,0:03:01.24,0:03:03.87,Default,,0,0,0,,My swords {\i1}hurt{\i0}. Dialogue: 10,0:03:03.87,0:03:07.46,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}They're nothing like the swords \Nyou goody two-shoes use! -Dialogue: 10,0:03:08.17,0:03:12.13,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}The way they rip and tear through flesh \Nis something I pride myself on!{is a matter of personal pride!} +Dialogue: 10,0:03:08.17,0:03:12.13,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}The way they rip and tear through flesh \Nis a matter of personal pride! Dialogue: 10,0:03:12.13,0:03:14.88,Default,,0,0,0,,Knock it off! There's a demon right over there! Dialogue: 10,0:03:15.17,0:03:16.80,Default,,0,0,0,,Who gives a damn?! Dialogue: 10,0:03:17.84,0:03:19.14,Default,,0,0,0,,Damn insects! @@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ Dialogue: 10,0:11:23.00,0:11:26.42,Default,,0,0,0,,You seem awfully lively for a Dialogue: 10,0:11:27.25,0:11:31.25,Default,,0,0,0,,Your flesh will be well worth gouging out! Dialogue: 10,0:11:36.30,0:11:39.01,Default,,0,0,0,,Self-taught! Beast Breathing! Dialogue: 10,0:11:39.55,0:11:43.35,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}Ripping up such a big target \Nis gonna be {\i1}so{\i0} worth it! -Dialogue: 10,0:11:44.64,0:11:48.27,Default,,0,0,0,,It takes guts to charge{ at} me head-on! +Dialogue: 10,0:11:44.64,0:11:48.27,Default,,0,0,0,,It takes guts to charge at me head-on! Dialogue: 10,0:11:50.94,0:11:53.69,Default,,0,0,0,,Owwie!{Yeowch!} Dialogue: 10,0:11:53.98,0:11:55.69,Default,,0,0,0,,Drop dead Dialogue: 10,0:11:55.69,0:11:57.82,Default,,0,0,0,,and be my stepping stone! diff --git a/13/YaibaBD_13 - Dialogue.ass b/13/YaibaBD_13 - Dialogue.ass index 3b84d7b..92c2af6 100644 --- a/13/YaibaBD_13 - Dialogue.ass +++ b/13/YaibaBD_13 - Dialogue.ass @@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ Dialogue: 10,0:04:08.73,0:04:11.02,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}Use your head, not just Dialogue: 10,0:04:13.57,0:04:15.74,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}Think! Think! Thin— Dialogue: 10,0:04:21.03,0:04:22.37,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}That was close! Dialogue: 10,0:04:22.37,0:04:24.49,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}That was {\i0}way{\i1} too close! -Dialogue: 10,0:04:24.49,0:04:27.12,Default,,0,0,0,,Damn! This is so irritating{infuriating}! +Dialogue: 10,0:04:24.49,0:04:27.12,Default,,0,0,0,,Damn! This is infuriating! Dialogue: 10,0:04:27.12,0:04:30.42,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}I've got to consume more rareblood! \NThere's no time to waste! Dialogue: 10,0:04:35.59,0:04:37.63,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}I don't even have time to stop and think! Dialogue: 10,0:04:40.68,0:04:41.51,Default,,0,0,0,,Hey, you! diff --git a/18/YaibaBD_18 - Dialogue.ass b/18/YaibaBD_18 - Dialogue.ass index aa1514b..d57e219 100644 --- a/18/YaibaBD_18 - Dialogue.ass +++ b/18/YaibaBD_18 - Dialogue.ass @@ -147,9 +147,9 @@ Dialogue: 10,0:11:19.74,0:11:22.62,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}Hang in there a little b Dialogue: 10,0:11:23.16,0:11:25.92,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1\q2}I'll come running over \Nas soon as I defeat this demon! Dialogue: 10,0:11:27.33,0:11:30.21,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}I'll come save you, no matter what! Dialogue: 10,0:11:31.17,0:11:33.92,Default,,0,0,0,,What are you waiting for? -Dialogue: 10,0:11:34.97,0:11:36.93,Default,,0,0,0,,Let's hear you say that again. +Dialogue: 10,0:11:34.97,0:11:36.93,Default,,0,0,0,,Let's hear you say it again. Dialogue: 10,0:11:38.47,0:11:39.93,Default,,0,0,0,,Well? -Dialogue: 10,0:11:39.93,0:11:41.68,Default,,0,0,0,,Say it again for me, will you? +Dialogue: 10,0:11:39.93,0:11:41.68,Default,,0,0,0,,Out with it. Dialogue: 10,0:11:41.68,0:11:42.89,Default,,0,0,0,,Sure! Dialogue: 10,0:11:42.89,0:11:44.98,Default,,0,0,0,,I'll say it as many times as you want! Dialogue: 10,0:11:44.98,0:11:47.35,Default,,0,0,0,,The bond between you is fake! diff --git a/20/YaibaBD_20 - Dialogue.ass b/20/YaibaBD_20 - Dialogue.ass index 264c25c..a5d435d 100644 --- a/20/YaibaBD_20 - Dialogue.ass +++ b/20/YaibaBD_20 - Dialogue.ass @@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ Dialogue: 10,0:03:36.99,0:03:39.45,Default,,0,0,0,,Did you really think you kill Dialogue: 10,0:03:39.45,0:03:41.24,Default,,0,0,0,,Poor thing. Dialogue: 10,0:03:41.24,0:03:44.20,Default,,0,0,0,,Did your pathetic delusion bring you joy? Dialogue: 10,0:03:45.12,0:03:48.42,Default,,0,0,0,,I used my threads to sever my own head. -Dialogue: 10,0:03:49.08,0:03:51.92,Default,,0,0,0,,You weren't actually cutting through my neck{anything}.{alt: You didn't actually cut <...>} +Dialogue: 10,0:03:49.08,0:03:51.92,Default,,0,0,0,,You weren't actually cutting through my neck{anything}.{alt: You didn't actually cut <...>}{closer to literal: Before you had a chance to chop it off.} Dialogue: 10,0:03:53.21,0:03:54.71,Default,,0,0,0,,I've had enough. Dialogue: 10,0:03:54.71,0:03:57.18,Default,,0,0,0,,I'll kill you {\i1}and{\i0} your sister. Dialogue: 10,0:03:57.76,0:04:01.18,Default,,0,0,0,,I haven't been this pissed in quite a while. diff --git a/22/YaibaBD_22 - Dialogue.ass b/22/YaibaBD_22 - Dialogue.ass index 3779386..5d7dd6b 100644 --- a/22/YaibaBD_22 - Dialogue.ass +++ b/22/YaibaBD_22 - Dialogue.ass @@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ Dialogue: 10,0:04:50.94,0:04:52.23,Default,,0,0,0,,Inosuke! Dialogue: 10,0:04:52.23,0:04:53.90,Default,,0,0,0,,Murata! Dialogue: 10,0:04:54.19,0:04:58.07,Default,,0,0,0,,Forget about him. What do we do with Tomioka? Dialogue: 10,0:05:03.57,0:05:08.45,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}It vexes me greatly to see him \Njust standing there unrestrained.{### meh on "unrestrained". my ideal edit involves a little bit more rewriting, but I'm not sure about the specifics} -Dialogue: 10,0:05:08.45,0:05:13.21,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}According to Kochou's report, \NTomioka is no less{### is this grammatical?} guilty. +Dialogue: 10,0:05:08.45,0:05:13.21,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}According to Kochou's report, \NTomioka is no less guilty. Dialogue: 10,0:05:14.42,0:05:16.05,Default,,0,0,0,,How will we deal with him? Dialogue: 10,0:05:16.05,0:05:18.01,Default,,0,0,0,,How should we hold him accountable? Dialogue: 10,0:05:18.01,0:05:20.76,Default,,0,0,0,,What sort of lesson should we teach him? diff --git a/23/YaibaBD_23 - Dialogue.ass b/23/YaibaBD_23 - Dialogue.ass index 2fb56fd..eab2971 100644 --- a/23/YaibaBD_23 - Dialogue.ass +++ b/23/YaibaBD_23 - Dialogue.ass @@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ Dialogue: 10,0:06:21.15,0:06:22.19,Default,,0,0,0,,I... Dialogue: 10,0:06:23.15,0:06:26.74,Default,,0,0,0,,Nezuko and I will defeat Kibutsuji Muzan! Dialogue: 10,0:06:27.28,0:06:29.54,Default,,0,0,0,,We will not fail! Dialogue: 10,0:06:29.54,0:06:32.62,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}We'll take him down and put an end \Nto this endless cycle of grief! -Dialogue: 10,0:06:34.62,0:06:37.34,Default,,0,0,0,,You aren't exactly ready to do that quite yet,{### meh?} +Dialogue: 10,0:06:34.62,0:06:37.34,Default,,0,0,0,,You aren't exactly equipped to do that just yet, Dialogue: 10,0:06:37.34,0:06:40.38,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}so let's focus on taking down \Na Blood Moon for now, all right? Dialogue: 10,0:06:41.80,0:06:42.97,Default,,0,0,0,,Yes, sir. Dialogue: 10,0:06:44.18,0:06:45.59,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}I mustn't laugh! @@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ Dialogue: 10,0:09:25.92,0:09:27.30,Default,,0,0,0,,I was about to piss my pants! Dialogue: 10,0:09:28.80,0:09:30.88,Default,,0,0,0,,You have no clue how terrifying the Hashira are! Dialogue: 10,0:09:30.88,0:09:32.51,Default,,0,0,0,,Try to read the room! Please! Dialogue: 10,0:09:32.51,0:09:34.68,Default,,0,0,0,,Don't think I'll ever forget this! -Dialogue: 10,0:09:34.68,0:09:36.14,Default,,0,0,0,,Me {n}either! +Dialogue: 10,0:09:34.68,0:09:36.14,Default,,0,0,0,,Me neither! Dialogue: 10,0:09:36.43,0:09:37.14,Default,,0,0,0,,Apologise! Dialogue: 10,0:09:37.14,0:09:39.48,Default,,0,0,0,,Apologise! Right now! Dialogue: 10,0:09:40.60,0:09:43.27,Default,,0,0,0,,I-I'm sorry. diff --git a/24/YaibaBD_24 - Dialogue.ass b/24/YaibaBD_24 - Dialogue.ass index 5abb5a7..c4464e7 100644 --- a/24/YaibaBD_24 - Dialogue.ass +++ b/24/YaibaBD_24 - Dialogue.ass @@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ Dialogue: 10,0:02:48.77,0:02:51.53,Default,,0,0,0,,Tanjirou, here's your medicin Dialogue: 10,0:02:51.53,0:02:52.53,Default,,0,0,0,,Here you go. Dialogue: 10,0:02:52.53,0:02:53.78,Default,,0,0,0,,Thank you. Dialogue: 10,0:02:57.66,0:02:58.53,Default,,0,0,0,,Hey! -Dialogue: 10,0:02:58.53,0:03:01.37,Default,,0,0,0,,Tanjirou's medicine goes down{ the hatch} pretty easily, huh? +Dialogue: 10,0:02:58.53,0:03:01.37,Default,,0,0,0,,Tanjirou's medicine goes down pretty easy, huh? Dialogue: 10,0:03:01.37,0:03:02.91,Default,,0,0,0,,It's different from mine, right? Dialogue: 10,0:03:02.91,0:03:05.92,Default,,0,0,0,,I sense favouritism! Favouritism, I say! Dialogue: 10,0:03:05.92,0:03:09.59,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}Zenitsu, this is a hospital ward! \NQuiet down a little! @@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ Dialogue: 10,0:18:35.34,0:18:38.26,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}It might be true that I' Dialogue: 10,0:18:39.39,0:18:42.73,Default,,0,0,0,,Ever since a demon slaughtered my beloved sister. Dialogue: 10,0:18:43.85,0:18:48.23,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}Every time I see the tears of those \Nwho've lost their loved ones to demons, Dialogue: 10,0:18:49.82,0:18:52.32,Default,,0,0,0,,every time I hear those cries of despair, -Dialogue: 10,0:18:53.32,0:18:58.33,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}the anger keeps building up \Ninside me and continues to swell.{### meh} +Dialogue: 10,0:18:53.32,0:18:58.33,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}the rage building up inside me \Ngrows a little bit stronger. Dialogue: 10,0:18:58.83,0:19:04.12,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}Deep down in the innermost depths of my body, \Nthere's a revulsion that I can't fight. Dialogue: 10,0:19:05.12,0:19:08.21,Default,,0,0,0,,I'm sure the same holds true for the other Hashira. Dialogue: 10,0:19:09.88,0:19:15.55,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}This time, they saw Nezuko, who's never \Ndevoured a human, with their own eyes. diff --git a/25/YaibaBD_25 - Dialogue.ass b/25/YaibaBD_25 - Dialogue.ass index 1d6c07c..03d3d95 100644 --- a/25/YaibaBD_25 - Dialogue.ass +++ b/25/YaibaBD_25 - Dialogue.ass @@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ Dialogue: 10,0:15:11.60,0:15:14.06,Default,,0,0,0,,My name is Kanamori. Dialogue: 10,0:15:14.06,0:15:17.15,Default,,0,0,0,,I forged Sir Inosuke's new swords. Dialogue: 10,0:15:17.60,0:15:20.11,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}I would be thrilled if they \Nwere to prove useful in battle. Dialogue: 10,0:15:28.74,0:15:30.37,Default,,0,0,0,,Pristine, are they not? -Dialogue: 10,0:15:30.37,0:15:33.66,Default,,0,0,0,,The dull sheen of that cyan-grey hue is just exquisite.{### refined, calm, sophisticated. that kind of vibe. I feel like there's a better word, but I can't find it} +Dialogue: 10,0:15:30.37,0:15:33.66,Default,,0,0,0,,The dull sheen of that cyan-grey hue is so tranquil. Dialogue: 10,0:15:33.66,0:15:35.58,Default,,0,0,0,,It's a fine colour for a sword. Dialogue: 10,0:15:35.58,0:15:39.50,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}I'm happy for you, Inosuke. \NYour old swords were chipped all over. Dialogue: 10,0:15:41.71,0:15:43.88,Default,,0,0,0,,How do you like the grips? diff --git a/26/YaibaBD_26 - Dialogue.ass b/26/YaibaBD_26 - Dialogue.ass index b1507cd..4500257 100644 --- a/26/YaibaBD_26 - Dialogue.ass +++ b/26/YaibaBD_26 - Dialogue.ass @@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ Dialogue: 10,0:09:52.74,0:09:56.08,Default,,0,0,0,,Over forty people have gone m Dialogue: 10,0:09:56.08,0:09:59.50,Default,,0,0,0,,You are to join Rengoku Kyoujurou on-site. Dialogue: 10,0:09:59.50,0:10:03.00,Default,,0,0,0,,Head west at once! Comment: 0,0:10:07.00,0:10:07.00,Default,chapter,0,0,0,,{Part B} -Dialogue: 10,0:10:11.42,0:10:16.39,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}I have decided to send Tanjirou and his friends \Non the Infinite Train mission.{### meh: something about this phrasing makes it sound like a rite of passage. sent them to help? conflict? campaign?} +Dialogue: 10,0:10:11.42,0:10:16.39,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}I have decided to send Tanjirou and his friends \Nas reinforcements on the Infinite Train mission. Dialogue: 10,0:10:17.26,0:10:21.52,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}Shinobu, may I ask what \Nmade you recommend Tanjirou? Dialogue: 10,0:10:22.39,0:10:27.19,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}Tanjirou has a pure soul and is capable of \Nstriving hard on a daily basis. Dialogue: 10,0:10:27.19,0:10:31.03,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}The promise he's shown \Nhas exceeded my expectations. @@ -430,7 +430,7 @@ Dialogue: 10,0:17:03.63,0:17:06.30,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}I had no idea you were p Dialogue: 10,0:17:06.30,0:17:10.18,Default,,0,0,0,,I don't know how I could ever thank you. Dialogue: 10,0:17:11.22,0:17:13.97,Default,,0,0,0,,Thank me by doing exemplary work. Dialogue: 10,0:17:14.64,0:17:18.06,Default,,0,0,0,,Our duty as Demon Slayers is to slay demons. -Dialogue: 10,0:17:18.06,0:17:19.06,Default,,0,0,0,,That's all.{Nothing more.} +Dialogue: 10,0:17:18.06,0:17:19.06,Default,,0,0,0,,Nothing more. Dialogue: 10,0:17:20.23,0:17:21.23,Default,,0,0,0,,Right! Dialogue: 10,0:17:23.77,0:17:25.82,Default,,0,0,0,,Take care, you guys! Dialogue: 10,0:17:25.82,0:17:29.19,Default,,0,0,0,,{\q2}You're all heartbroken to \Nsay goodbye to me, aren't you?