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React: Improve phrasing in Fetching Data In React lesson #29268

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Maddily opened this issue Jan 2, 2025 · 0 comments
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React: Improve phrasing in Fetching Data In React lesson #29268

Maddily opened this issue Jan 2, 2025 · 0 comments

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Maddily commented Jan 2, 2025

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The Using fetch in React components section, which follows a basic example of fetching data with fetch, begins with the sentence:
"Now, let’s take a look at how we can incorporate fetch into a similar React component."

The phrase "a similar React component" is unclear. Similar to what? The previous example isn't a React component, so the comparison feels misplaced.

Changing it to "Now, let’s take a look at how we can incorporate fetch into a React component, similar to our previous example" makes it feel clearer and easier to follow.

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https://www.theodinproject.com/lessons/node-path-react-new-fetching-data-in-react

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