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diff --git a/source/making_payments/index.html.md.erb b/source/making_payments/index.html.md.erb
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ weight: 2100
 
 This section tells you how to take a payment using the GOV.UK Pay API.
 
-If you want to take payments using our no-code solution, you can use [payment links](https://www.payments.service.gov.uk/govuk-payment-pages/).
+If you want to take payments using a no-code solution instead, you can use [payment links](https://www.payments.service.gov.uk/govuk-payment-pages/).
 
 When your user makes a payment, your service should supply a `reference`. If
 possible, this should be a unique identifier for the payment. If your
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ payment journey on GOV.UK Pay ends.
 
 ## Creating a payment
 
-The endpoint to create a payment with the GOV.UK Pay API is:
+To create a payment with the GOV.UK Pay API, use this endpoint:
 
 `POST  /v1/payments`
 

diff --git a/source/moto_payments/moto_api/index.html.md.erb b/source/moto_payments/moto_api/index.html.md.erb
@@ -27,8 +27,8 @@ Make sure you've [turned on MOTO (telephone or post) payments on your account](/
     }
     ```
 2. Go to the `next_url` included in the response to your API request.
-3. Enter your user’s payment details on the **Enter payment details** page. The **Enter payment details** page will not have a billing address field, even if you've turned on  billing address collection on your service.
-4. Confirm the payment on the **Confirm your payment** page. You will not need to do 3D Secure confirmation.
+3. On the **Enter payment details** page, enter your user’s payment details. The **Enter payment details** page does not have a billing address field, even if you've turned on billing address collection on your service.
+4. On the **Confirm your payment** page, confirm the payment details. You will not need to do a 3D Secure confirmation.
 
 ### Taking a payment by post
 

diff --git a/source/recurring_payments/index.html.md.erb b/source/recurring_payments/index.html.md.erb
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ Your service has [additional responsibilities when taking recurring payments](/r
 * telling users when you’re going to take or change payments 
 * letting users amend their recurring payments
 
-It would be helpful to be familiar with [the standard GOV.UK Pay payment flow](/payment_flow) before reading about recurring payments.
+It would be helpful to familiarise yourself [the standard GOV.UK Pay payment flow](/payment_flow) before reading about recurring payments.
 
 This section outlines the recurring payment flow, your responsibilities, and how to set up and use agreements to take recurring payments.
 

diff --git a/source/refunding_payments/index.html.md.erb b/source/refunding_payments/index.html.md.erb
@@ -7,9 +7,9 @@ weight: 4100
 
 # Refund a payment
 
-<%= warning_text('If you are a member of the public trying to get a refund, please contact the department you made the payment to. This page is for civil servants that take payments with GOV.UK Pay. ') %>
+<%= warning_text('If you are a member of the public trying to get a refund, please contact the government department you made the payment to. This page is for civil servants that take payments with GOV.UK Pay. ') %>
 
-You can refund all or part of a payment using the GOV.UK Pay API or by signing into the [GOV.UK Pay admin tool](https://selfservice.payments.service.gov.uk/login). This page focuses on refunding through our API.
+You can refund all or part of a payment using the GOV.UK Pay API or by signing into the [GOV.UK Pay admin tool](https://selfservice.payments.service.gov.uk/login). This page focuses on refunding payments using our API.
 
 Your user will receive the refund in the same account they originally paid from. You cannot refund a payment to another card or bank account.
 

diff --git a/source/webhooks/index.html.md.erb b/source/webhooks/index.html.md.erb
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ weight: 3300
 
 # Receive automatic payment event updates using webhooks
 
-This section tells you how to use webhooks to automatically receive updates after payment events. You'll need a technical team to build webhooks integration.
+This section tells you how to use webhooks to automatically receive updates after payment events. You'll need a technical team to build a webhooks integration.
 
 A webhook is when GOV.UK Pay sends automatic `POST` requests to your service after payment events. A payment event is when a payment reaches a milestone in its journey and its `state` updates, such as when it’s created, paid, or refunded.