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 title: Introduction to Apollo Client
-subtitle: Learn how Apollo Client simplifies GraphQL data management  and helps build delightful UIs
+subtitle: Learn how Apollo Client simplifies GraphQL data management to help build web apps
 description: Discover Apollo Client, a powerful state management library for JavaScript. Learn how it simplifies fetching, caching, and more with GraphQL.
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diff --git a/docs/source/why-apollo.mdx b/docs/source/why-apollo.mdx
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@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
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 title: Why Apollo Client?
-subtitle: Discover why Apollo Client is the ideal choice for managing both remote and local data with GraphQL
+subtitle: Discover why Apollo Client is the ideal choice for managing data with GraphQL
 description: Learn how Apollo Client simplifies data management with GraphQL, offers intelligent caching, and unifies remote and local data.
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