From 5d9fe9ededbd61df8be81c082848e0a8d5114af3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Rob Nichols <robert.nichols@digital.cabinet-office.gov.uk>
Date: Tue, 20 Feb 2024 11:50:38 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Refinement of home page text

---
 app/views/home/index.html.erb | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/app/views/home/index.html.erb b/app/views/home/index.html.erb
index cdd8f1b..ba74877 100644
--- a/app/views/home/index.html.erb
+++ b/app/views/home/index.html.erb
@@ -8,12 +8,12 @@
 </p>
 <ul class="govuk-list govuk-list--bullet">
   <li>
-    Each entry is provided with it's own form. This give a place where text can be added
-    to described to the user what information is required for each entry.
+    The entry at each step is provided with it's own form. This give a place where text can
+    be added to described to the user what information is required at each step.
   </li>
   <li>
-    Validation can be applied for each entry. This give immediate (on submission) feedback
-    on any problems with the input. That feedback will be specific to the current entry
+    Validation can be applied at each step. This give immediate (on submission) feedback
+    on any problems with the input. That feedback will be specific to the current step
     so will be easier to understand.
   </li>
   <li>
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
     When the central host app is updated, the update applies to all users.
   </li>
   <li>
-    Submission are stored in a central database so can be shared as needed, or passed
+    Submissions are stored in a central database so can be shared as needed, or passed
     to additional services (the data marketplace for example) as required.
   </li>
 </ul>