kbott comments

[RhoBott]

heyo, your repo is a veritable party platter of folders. tidy that business up!

abstract
watch the unsubstantiated assertions, folks "as countless articles will tell you..." , "large amounts", etc. Tighten up your arguments + use numbers.
revisit for copyedits -- e.g. Capitalize Portland, Aditionally ==> Additionally ... I won't keep up w the fine tooth comb, but. Revisit. (dicuss, e.g. ... read it slowly. out loud if needed.)
Why is it worth looking into these things (You tell me it is but not why. Feel free to explain why I care in the abstract, it will encourage me to keep reading.)
possibly drop last two sentences.

migration over time

• first figure lives w/ the angels, i guess? please to locate and ground to graph.

//// ran out of minutes, sorry. love y'all but there's a finite amount of kbott and a non-finite amount of stuff that has to happen here. i will try to revisit later tonight if i can. //// 12:13pm wednesday -kb