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 <%= javascript_packs_with_chunks_tag 'home', 'data-turbolinks-track': 'reload' %>
 <div class="Home-strapline">
-  <p class="u-mb">We share community-based projects that work towards a Carbon Neutral Stroud District by 2030 and connect groups organising them.</p>
+  <p class="u-mb">We share and connect community-based projects working towards a Carbon Neutral Stroud District by 2030</p>
   <p class="u-mb">Share knowledge. Enable Change</p>
 </div>