Merge pull request #654 from humanmade/backport-653-to-v24-branch

[Backport v24-branch] Fix some some typos

Author: mikelittle

other-docs/guides/upgrading/v24.md

@@ -55,11 +55,11 @@ Please [send us any feedback you have](support://new).
 ### Altis Dashboard Features
 
 In order to empower and improve developer experience we continue to ship self-service features and improvements to the Dashboard. In
-this release we have updated soem of the existing features as well as laying the groundwork for future ones.
+this release we have updated some of the existing features as well as laying the groundwork for future ones.
 
 #### Self-Service PHP Upgrades
 
-The Self-service PHP upgrades we introduced in the last release have been refined and improved. In particular some tricky
+The Self-service PHP upgrades we introduced in the last release have been refined and improved. In particular, some tricky
 edge-cases are now handled better.
 
 This update builds on our ongoing mission to give developers greater control over their infrastructure, just like with
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ Composer-managed WordPress versions. We're continuing to explore ways to further
 #### Domains Management
 
 We have improved the domains management experience in the Dashboard, making it easier to manage your domains and subdomains.
-Some of those tricky DNS issue are now handled better. We make it clearer why certificate validation fails, and you can now retry
+Some of those tricky DNS issues are now handled better. We make it clearer why certificate validation fails, and you can now retry
 the validation process from the Dashboard.
 
 You now have the ability to delete domains and subdomains from the Dashboard.