From 04f059d635653255172ad1453784efd94322069b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: fmarino-ipzs <77629526+fmarino-ipzs@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Tue, 15 Oct 2024 14:48:24 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Apply suggestions from code review Co-authored-by: Giuseppe De Marco --- docs/en/ssi-introduction.rst | 2 +- docs/en/trust.rst | 2 +- 2 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/en/ssi-introduction.rst b/docs/en/ssi-introduction.rst index bceaff26..093139f1 100644 --- a/docs/en/ssi-introduction.rst +++ b/docs/en/ssi-introduction.rst @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ Users possess their digital documents and determine to which actors they present The main difference between this new approach and the traditional IAM infrastructure is that during the presentation phase there are no intermediaries between the Wallet and the Relying Party, while in the SAML2 or OIDC based infrastructure an Identity Provider is always involved, knowing which services a citizen is accessing to. -Self-Sovereign Identity (SSI) is also significant in the field of data exchange and data governance. This is relevant at both national and European levels, including the new eIDAS Regulation. In fact, it envisions a login option designed for European Users - be they citizens, public administrations, or companies - who want to access another Member State's services using their national authentication systems. +Digital identity Wallet Architectures are significant in the field of data exchange and data governance. In accordance with the eIDAS Regulation, a new digital identity paradigm is designed for European Users - be they citizens, public administrations, or companies - who want to access another Member State's services using their national authentication systems. The main roles in a Wallet ecosystem are are listed as follow: diff --git a/docs/en/trust.rst b/docs/en/trust.rst index 8fbb5635..b97eeb09 100644 --- a/docs/en/trust.rst +++ b/docs/en/trust.rst @@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ The Trust Anchor Entity Configuration, in addition of the common parameters list Entity Configuration Leaves and Intermediates ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ -In addition to the previously defined claims, the Entity Configuration of the Leaf and of the Intermediate Entities, MAY contain the parameters listed below: +In addition to the previously defined claims, the Entity Configuration of the Leaves and of the Intermediate Entities use the following parameters: .. list-table::