Tanya PR comments

Author: ghidalgo3

datasets/hls2/hls2-example.ipynb

@@ -200,7 +200,9 @@
     }
    },
    "source": [
-    "Search for low-cloud items using `eo:cloud_cover` in each of the collections of interest.  Specify the landsat-8 and landsat-9 platforms to avoid degraded data from landsat-7. "
+    "Search for low-cloud items using `eo:cloud_cover` in each of the collections of interest. \n",
+    "This query searches for items with <= 10% cloud cover.\n",
+    "Specify the landsat-8 and landsat-9 platforms to avoid degraded data from landsat-7. "
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -291,7 +293,7 @@
     }
    },
    "source": [
-    "We can construct a table summarizing the available assets for each collection.  The indicates which four assets are relevant for RGB and NDVI (Normalized Difference Vegetation Index) visualizations, with common names of red, green, blue, and nir/nir08.  Importantly, the datasets do **not** have identical mapping of band names to spectral region."
+    "We can construct a table summarizing the available assets for each collection.  The table indicates the four assets relevant for RGB and NDVI (Normalized Difference Vegetation Index) visualizations, with common names of red, green, blue, and nir/nir08.  Importantly, the datasets do **not** have identical mapping of band names to spectral region."
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -509,7 +511,7 @@
     }
    },
    "source": [
-    "And iterate across all items to get the mean NDVI within `nvdi_bbox_of_interest` for each time point within each collection"
+    "And iterate across all items to get the mean NDVI within `ndvi_bbox_of_interest` for each time point within each collection"
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -730,7 +732,8 @@
     "            }\n",
     "        )\n",
     "\n",
-    "        # Print every 20th item, and also the last item\n",
+    "        # Print progress upon calculating every 40th item,\n",
+    "        # and also the last item\n",
     "        if ii % 40 == 0 or ii == len(items):\n",
     "            print(f\"    ... {ii}/{len(items)} items processed\")\n",
     "\n",
@@ -1021,7 +1024,8 @@
     }
    },
    "source": [
-    "We can also construct a gif over all a collection's items `timelapse_bbox_of_interest`.  Notice the seasonal changes in vegetation align with time series plotted earlier."
+    "We can also construct a gif over all a collection's items `timelapse_bbox_of_interest`.\n",
+    "Notice the seasonal changes in vegetation align with the time series plotted earlier."
    ]
   },
   {