wording changes, adjustment regarding upcoming reminder change.

Author: cielf

docs/user_guide/bank/intro_i.md

@@ -9,10 +9,10 @@ sponsors who provide funding or in-kind services for the servers that the system
 
 ## What we help with
 - managing your Partners
-  - gathering the information about your Partners that you need
+  - gathering the information you need about your Partners
   - your Request / Distribution cycle (Partners can provide requests to you through the system, and you fulfill  them)
-  - monthly reminders to the Partners re Request deadlines
-  - calendar that shows when you've scheduled Pickups and Deliveries
+  - scheduled reminders to the Partners re Request deadlines
+  - a calendar that shows when you've scheduled Pickups and Deliveries
 - inventory
   - when you record Donations, Purchases, and Distributions (to Partners), your Inventory record is automatically adjusted as of the date/time you enter the information
   - Audits and Inventory Adjustments
@@ -25,8 +25,8 @@ sponsors who provide funding or in-kind services for the servers that the system
   - itemized distribution breakdown over time
   - trend reporting
 
-## Things we don't help with
-- general business needs (like payroll and office supplies and the like)
+## What we don't help with
+- general business needs (such as payroll)
 - volunteer coordination
 - donor tax receipts 
 - direct distribution -- there are some things that help with that in the Partner side, and some banks run a Partner for their direct distribution practice, but it is not our strength.