Update mint-your-first-token.md

Proofreading for mint-your-first-token.md

Author: tsivarev

docs/v3/guidelines/dapps/tutorials/mint-your-first-token.md

@@ -4,15 +4,15 @@ Welcome, dev! It's great to have you here. 👋
 
 In this article, we'll tell you about creating your first fungible token (Jetton) on TON.
 
-To mint Jettons we will be using the [TON Minter](https://minter.ton.org/) / [TON Minter testnet](https://minter.ton.org/?testnet=true) browser service.
+To mint a token, we will use the [TON Minter](https://minter.ton.org/).
 
 ## 📖 What you'll learn
 
 In this article, you'll learn how to:
 
-- deploy a Jetton using your browser
-- customize your token
-- manage and use your token
+- deploy a token using TON Minter
+- customize the token
+- manage and use the token
 - edit the token parameters
 
 
@@ -53,12 +53,12 @@ Click the `Connect Wallet` button to connect your [Tonhub](https://ton.app/walle
 
 ![image](/img/tutorials/jetton/jetton-token-logo.png)
 
-If you want to have an attractive Jetton token, you need to host a beautiful logo somewhere. For example:
+If you want to have an attractive token, you need to host a beautiful logo somewhere. For example:
 
 * https://bitcoincash-example.github.io/website/logo.png
 
 :::info
- You can easily find out  about url placement of the logo in the [repository](https://github.com/ton-blockchain/minter-contract#jetton-metadata-field-best-practices) in paragraph "Where is this metadata stored".
+ You can easily find out about the URL placement of the logo in the [repository](https://github.com/ton-blockchain/minter-contract#jetton-metadata-field-best-practices) in the "Where is this metadata stored" paragraph.
 
  * On-chain.
  * Off-chain IPFS.
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ On the right side of the screen, you can **send tokens** to multi-currency walle
 ![image](/img/tutorials/jetton/jetton-send-tokens.png)
 
 :::info
- You always also **burn** your Jettons to reduce their amount.
+ You also can **burn** your tokens to reduce their amount.
 
  ![image](/img/tutorials/jetton/jetton-burn-tokens.png)
 :::
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ You can access the **search field** at the top of the site by entering the token
 
  ## ✏️ Jetton (token) customization
 
-With the [FunC](/v3/documentation/smart-contracts/func/overview) language you can change the behavior of the token in your favor.
+With the [FunC](/v3/documentation/smart-contracts/func/overview) language, you can change a token's behavior in your favor.
 
 To make any changes, begin here:
 
@@ -124,20 +124,20 @@ To make any changes, begin here:
 
  1. Make sure you have all "Dependencies and Requirements" from the [tonstarter-contracts](https://github.com/ton-defi-org/tonstarter-contracts) repo.
  2. Clone the [minter-contract repository](https://github.com/ton-blockchain/minter-contract) and rename the project. 
- 3. To install you need to open a terminal at the root and run:
+ 3. To install, you need to open a terminal at the root and run:
 
  ```bash npm2yarn
  npm install
  ```
 
- 4. Edit the original smart contract files same way in the root terminal. All contract files are in `contracts/*.fc`
+ 4. Edit the original smart contract files the same way in the root terminal. All contract files are in `contracts/*.fc`
 
  5. Build a project by using: 
 
  ```bash npm2yarn
  npm run build
  ```
- The build result will be describes the process of creating the necessary files, as well as the search for smart contracts. 
+ The build result will describe the process of creating the necessary files and the search for smart contracts. 
 
  :::info
  Read the console, there are a lot of tips!
@@ -149,23 +149,23 @@ To make any changes, begin here:
  npm run test
  ```
 
- 7. Edit the **name** and other metadata of the token in `build/jetton-minter.deploy.ts` by changing JettonParams object.
+ 7. Edit the **name** and other metadata of the token in `build/jetton-minter.deploy.ts` by changing the JettonParams object.
 
  ```js
-// This is example data - Modify these params for your own jetton!
+// This is example data - Modify these parameters for your jetton!
 // - Data is stored on-chain (except for the image data itself)
 // - Owner should usually be the deploying wallet's address.
 
  const jettonParams = {
   owner: Address.parse("EQD4gS-Nj2Gjr2FYtg-s3fXUvjzKbzHGZ5_1Xe_V0-GCp0p2"),
   name: "MyJetton",
   symbol: "JET1",
-  image: "https://www.linkpicture.com/q/download_183.png", // Image url
+  image: "https://www.linkpicture.com/q/download_183.png", // Image URL
   description: "My jetton",
 };
  ```
 
- 8. To deploy a token use the following command:
+ 8. To deploy a token, use the following command:
 
  ```bash npm2yarn
  npm run deploy
@@ -187,10 +187,10 @@ To make any changes, begin here:
 
     * Found root contract 'build/jetton-minter.deploy.ts - let's deploy it':
      - Based on your init code+data, your new contract address is: YOUR-ADDRESS
-     - Let's deploy the contract on-chain..
+     - Let's deploy the contract on-chain.
      - Deploy transaction sent successfully
      - Block explorer link: https://tonwhales.com/explorer/address/YOUR-ADDRESS
-     - Waiting up to 20 seconds to check if the contract was actually deployed..
+     - Waiting up to 20 seconds to check if the contract was actually deployed.
      - SUCCESS! Contract deployed successfully to address: YOUR-ADDRESS
      - New contract balance is now YOUR-BALANCE TON, make sure it has enough to pay rent
      - Running a post deployment test: