From e8e4adf296af796e68dde35be110151973cd5945 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Coralie Mercier <coralie@w3.org>
Date: Tue, 2 Apr 2024 14:41:12 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Quality Assurance

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 2024/ig-exploration.html | 28 ++++++++++++++--------------
 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

diff --git a/2024/ig-exploration.html b/2024/ig-exploration.html
index 5ac1b85..3cf9a74 100644
--- a/2024/ig-exploration.html
+++ b/2024/ig-exploration.html
@@ -156,27 +156,27 @@ <h2>Motivation and Background</h2>
         </p>
         <ul>
           <li>New ideas and dimensions: a new human step may impact
-            the Web, e.g. "autonomous L4/L5 cars", "one continent
+            the Web, e.g., "autonomous L4/L5 cars", "one continent
             forking the technology stack of the Internet and the Web",
             "sustainable blockchain", "6G Networks";</li>
-          <li>New people: a welcoming point for people who are unfamiliar
+          <li>New people: a welcoming point for <i class="todo">Members/people</i> who are unfamiliar
             with our processes and systems, to understand the organization;</li>
-          <li>New workshops: it's relevant and need to have align around the
-            next steps for W3C, e.g. "generative AI", "Digital Identity on
+          <li>New workshops: a relevant topic needs alignment around the
+            next steps for W3C, e.g., "generative AI", "Digital Identity on
             the Web";</li>
           <li>Monitoring industry trends: monitor other SDOs by leveraging the
             knowledge of W3C Members and enrolling them to monitor outside
             organizations, and report back on regular basis;</li>
           <li>Publishing Report: Create public analyses of trends that affect
-            the web, seeking rough consensus or respectful presentation of
-            competing perspectives on them. The analyses would summarize
+            the Web, seeking rough consensus or presentation of
+            competing perspectives. The analyses would summarize
             the trending topic, outline the promise and pitfalls that are
             being discussed, point to relevant W3C efforts, and indicate
-            the degree of consensus in the CG on the value of the topic
-            for the web;</li>
-          <li>Chartering: there is a charter but need to measure the interest
-            from W3C community at large and make it fit in the larger
-            picture, e.g. Real Estate IG.</li>
+            the degree of consensus in the group on the value of the topic
+            for the Web;</li>
+          <li>Chartering: there is a charter but we need to measure the interest
+            from the W3C community at large and make it fit in the larger
+            picture, e.g., Real Estate IG.</li>
         </ul>
       </div>
 
@@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ <h2>Scope</h2>
           The goal of Exploration Interest Group provides a platform to help
           the W3C community explore emerging Web-related technology trends,
           consider how the community could collaborate to shape these trends
-          for the benefit of Web users, accelerate chartering investigations
+          for the benefit of the Web users, accelerate chartering investigations
           and endeavors, and continually strengthen the innovation of W3C.
         </p>
         <ul>
@@ -209,7 +209,7 @@ <h2>Scope</h2>
         </li>
         <li>
           Discuss how to continue improving the exploration and
-          investigation process, and propose improvements to the AB and the
+          investigation process, and propose improvements to the W3C Advisory Board and the
           W3C Team.
         </li>
       </ul>
@@ -293,7 +293,7 @@ <h2>
           Communication
         </h2>
         <p id="public">
-          Technical discussions for this Interest Group are conducted in <a href="https://www.w3.org/Consortium/Process/#confidentiality-levels">public</a>: the meeting minutes from teleconference and face-to-face meetings will be archived for public review, and technical discussions and issue tracking will be conducted in a manner that can be both read and written to by the general public. Working Drafts and Editor's Drafts of specifications will be developed in public repositories and may permit direct public contribution requests.
+          Technical discussions for this Interest Group are conducted in <a href="https://www.w3.org/Consortium/Process/#confidentiality-levels">public</a>: the meeting minutes from teleconference and face-to-face meetings will be archived for public review, and technical discussions and issue tracking will be conducted in a manner that can be both read and written to by the general public. <i class="todo">Working Drafts and Editor's Drafts of specifications will be developed in public repositories and may permit direct public contribution requests. (Does the IG plan to write EDs and WDs?)</i>
         The meetings themselves are not open to public participation, however.
         </p>
         <p>