From 581e7d2cd74bf72c1f49742a3f99d110fb9db491 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Manu Sporny Date: Wed, 26 Jun 2024 19:15:59 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Fix grammar in legal processes and coercion section. Co-authored-by: Ted Thibodeau Jr --- index.html | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/index.html b/index.html index 841d9c4af..e357e6025 100644 --- a/index.html +++ b/index.html @@ -5424,7 +5424,7 @@

The Principle of Data Minimization

Implementers of software used by [=holders=] are urged to disclose what information is being requested by a [=verifier=], such that a [=holder=] can -push back on the over-collection of information that is unnecessary for the +decline to share specific requested information that is unnecessary for the transaction. Additionally, logs of information shared with [=verifiers=] are strongly encouraged to be available to [=holders=] such that the information might be shared with authorities if a [=holder=] believes that they are a @@ -5772,16 +5772,16 @@

Usage Patterns

Legal Processes

-It is possible, through legal processes, for private information to be compelled -to be disclosed to authorities, such as law enforcement, by [=issuers=], -[=holders=], and/or [=verifiers=]. It is also possible for the same private +It is possible, through legal processes, for [=issuers=], [=holders=], and/or +[=verifiers=] to be compelled to disclose private information to authorities, +such as law enforcement. It is also possible for the same private information to be accidentally disclosed to an unauthorized party through a software bug or security failure. Authors of legal processes and compliance regimes are advised to draft guidelines that notify the [=subjects=] involved when their private information is purposefully or accidentally disclosed to a third party. Providers of software services are advised to be transparent about -who and under what circumstances that private information might be shared with a -third party. +known circumstances that might cause such private information to be shared with +a third party, and about the identity of any such third party.