From 1f1ff58d0d258ad7f5453b958d76bd11a5fd7147 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Mary Jo Mueller Date: Thu, 5 Sep 2024 18:36:29 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 1/3] remove description of "replaced" and "original" - those aren't used --- comments-by-guideline-and-success-criterion.md | 2 -- 1 file changed, 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/comments-by-guideline-and-success-criterion.md b/comments-by-guideline-and-success-criterion.md index 6c1c0fd4..efbe9cf2 100644 --- a/comments-by-guideline-and-success-criterion.md +++ b/comments-by-guideline-and-success-criterion.md @@ -5,8 +5,6 @@ The WCAG2ICT Task Force has incorporated all of the new WCAG 2.1 and WCAG 2.2 gu The sections that follow are organized according to the principles, guidelines, and success criteria from WCAG 2. The text of each success criterion from WCAG 2 is copied as quoted text. Following that, the WCAG2ICT guidance is provided. The WCAG2ICT guidance can be found in the sections where the headings begin with "Applying..." to highlight that this is the content specific to this document. Within these sections there are different kinds of notes, including: -* **original** — original WCAG notes that have not been altered in the WCAG2ICT guidance -* **replaced** — original WCAG notes with replacements and/or additions as agreed in the WCAG2ICT document * **added** — custom notes added for the WCAG2ICT document, marked with the text "added". ### perceivable From 32f96bfeb3db7e289c0866ba8cec134cfa21372f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Mary Jo Mueller Date: Thu, 5 Sep 2024 18:39:52 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 2/3] Update the description of added notes --- ...nts-on-definitions-in-wcag-2.2-glossary-in-appendix-a.md | 6 +----- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/comments-on-definitions-in-wcag-2.2-glossary-in-appendix-a.md b/comments-on-definitions-in-wcag-2.2-glossary-in-appendix-a.md index c6e83852..bd1727cf 100644 --- a/comments-on-definitions-in-wcag-2.2-glossary-in-appendix-a.md +++ b/comments-on-definitions-in-wcag-2.2-glossary-in-appendix-a.md @@ -5,11 +5,7 @@ Comments on Definitions in WCAG 2 Glossary This draft of WCAG2ICT added guidance on applying new WCAG 2.2 glossary terms to non-web documents and software. The following terms were added since the First Public Working Draft: Cognitive function test, dragging movements, encloses, focus indicator, minimum bounding box, and perimeter. In addition, guidance for the term [CSS pixel](#dfn-css-pixels) was updated to address public comments. -The sections that follow are organized according to the glossary from WCAG 2. The text of each term from WCAG 2 is copied as quoted text. Following that, the WCAG2ICT guidance is provided. The WCAG2ICT guidance can be found in the sections where the headings begin with "Applying..." to highlight that this is the content specific to this document. Within these sections there are different kinds of notes, including: - -* **original** — original WCAG notes that have not been altered in the WCAG2ICT guidance -* **replaced** — original WCAG notes with replacements and/or additions as agreed in the WCAG2ICT document -* **added** — custom notes added for the WCAG2ICT document, marked with the text "added". +The sections that follow are organized according to the glossary from WCAG 2. The text of each term from WCAG 2 is copied as quoted text. Following that, the WCAG2ICT guidance is provided. The WCAG2ICT guidance can be found in the sections where the headings begin with "Applying..." to highlight that this is the content specific to this document. Within these sections custom notes added by WCAG2ICT are marked with the text "ADDED". The following is a complete list of definitions from the WCAG 2 glossary. Some items apply to all technologies and do not require additional guidance in this document; guidance on the remainder follows. From 38db429c7d1c49a5cfd332a282d24106f02e6de5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Mary Jo Mueller Date: Thu, 5 Sep 2024 18:41:15 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 3/3] Make description of added notes more concise, consistent with definitions section --- comments-by-guideline-and-success-criterion.md | 4 +--- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/comments-by-guideline-and-success-criterion.md b/comments-by-guideline-and-success-criterion.md index efbe9cf2..346ebf80 100644 --- a/comments-by-guideline-and-success-criterion.md +++ b/comments-by-guideline-and-success-criterion.md @@ -3,9 +3,7 @@ Comments by Guideline and Success Criterion
The WCAG2ICT Task Force has incorporated all of the new WCAG 2.1 and WCAG 2.2 guidelines, success criteria, and glossary terms into this draft. The Task Force also made changes to address public comments.
-The sections that follow are organized according to the principles, guidelines, and success criteria from WCAG 2. The text of each success criterion from WCAG 2 is copied as quoted text. Following that, the WCAG2ICT guidance is provided. The WCAG2ICT guidance can be found in the sections where the headings begin with "Applying..." to highlight that this is the content specific to this document. Within these sections there are different kinds of notes, including: - -* **added** — custom notes added for the WCAG2ICT document, marked with the text "added". +The sections that follow are organized according to the principles, guidelines, and success criteria from WCAG 2. The text of each success criterion from WCAG 2 is copied as quoted text. Following that, the WCAG2ICT guidance is provided. The WCAG2ICT guidance can be found in the sections where the headings begin with "Applying..." to highlight that this is the content specific to this document. Within these sections custom notes added by WCAG2ICT are marked with the text "ADDED". ### perceivable