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* Control Session #5 Tweak language to hand over to IS-12. This section is covered by the Control Session section in IS-12. * Property Changes #16 Handover to the protocol. Requirements described by IS-12 * NCA Classes #24 - Adjust conformance language and handover to MS-05-02 where appropriate * NCA Classes #26 Clarify conformance language and hand over to MS-05-02 where appropriate * NCA Classes #27 Tweak conformance language and handover to MS-05-02 * NCA Classes #28 Tweak conformance language and handover to MS-05-02 * NCA Classes #29 Tweak conformance language and handover to MS-05-02 * NCA Classes #30 Tweak conformance language and handover to MS-05-02 * NCA Classes #31 Tweak language and handover to MS-05-02 * Managers #43 Tweak language. * Block #44 Cleanup sections and prepare for migration of conformance language to MS-05-02 * Nonstandard Classes #33 Tweak language * NMOS Touchpoints #55 Handover to MS-05-02 * Concurrency control #57 Tweak conformance language and improve link. * Update Identification.md Remove unnecessary mention of IS-12 * Blockspec ID Refactor and handover with links. * Review device model section and handover/remove sections covered by MS-05-02 and MS-05-03. Also update Blockspecs diagram. * Remove Appendix as information is covered in MS-05-02 * Review control model section and handover/remove sections covered by MS-05-02. Also update ControlModel diagram. * Remove Appending B link as information is covered in MS-05-02 * Update Scope.md To improve clarity and remove bloat. * Update Definitions.md To revise conformance language and improve clarity * Update Components.md To improve clarity and reduce bloat (blockspecs are already covered in the device model which is linked here). * Update Security.md Remove IS-12 mention. * Update Core Mechanisms.md To improve clarity, reduce bloat and handover to the other specs. * Further clarity changes and transitioning some usages of "may" to "can" * Update docs/Device Model.md Co-authored-by: jonathan-r-thorpe <[email protected]> * Update docs/Control Model.md Co-authored-by: jonathan-r-thorpe <[email protected]> * Update Core Mechanisms.md Migrate concurrency paragraph to IS-12. * Update Definitions.md With recommended wording from the activity call today. --------- Co-authored-by: jonathan-r-thorpe <[email protected]>
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