grammatical corrections in subsection 1.4.4

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@@ -20,8 +20,8 @@ \subsection{Security and privacy}
 This requires a particular effort on security in every component of the systems and in the communications that are performed over the network.
 
 \subsection{Fair share business model}
-Contributors to the Grid must be economically rewarded in order to be incentivized to offer their devices to the project. Hence, it comes useful a fair share business model: users receive a fraction of the earnings obtained by the payments of the requestors of the services of the Grid; the reward is proportional to the contribution made by the device that participated to offer the requested service.
+Contributors to the Grid must be economically rewarded in order to be incentivized to offer their devices to the project. Hence, a fair share business model will be useful to this purpose: users receive a fraction of the earnings obtained by the payments of the requestors of Grid services; the reward is proportional to the contribution made by the device that participated to offer the requested service.
 
-This business model allows the owners of the Grid to make a profit (while needing to only sustain the costs of the machines used to connect the machines of the requestors and the nodes of the Grid) while also rewarding contributors of the Grid for the usage of their computational resources (while not needing an active effort other than the initial setup).
+This business model allows the owners of the Grid to make a profit (while needing only to sustain the costs of the machines used to connect the machines of the requestors and the nodes of the Grid) while also rewarding contributors of the Grid for the usage of their computational resources (while not needing an active effort other than the initial setup).
 
 A focus on the efficiency of the Grid, reducing costs for the owners of the Grid, is essential also to offer services with a competitive cost compared to other solutions.