feat: update intro scene

Assets/Typewriter/Tables/EntryGate.tw

@@ -70,8 +70,8 @@ R_inspect_kiosk_window_D,thought,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,Not the stealthiest wa
 ,,,,,FALSE,FALSE,,,,,,0,
 L_do_break_window,action,option,LT,item,TRUE,FALSE,Break the window.,C_security_kiosk,"window_broken = 0
 inspected_window = 1
-LT_item = I_rock",,,3,LT_item
-L_break_window,thought,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,That should do it.,,,window_broken = 1,,0,
+LT_item = I_rock",window_broken = 1,,3,LT_item
+L_break_window,thought,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,That should do it.,,,,,0,
 L_do_take_chair,action,option,LT,item,FALSE,FALSE,Pick up the chair.,C_security_kiosk,"window_broken = 1
 LT_item = 0
 I_chair = 1",,,3,I_chair
@@ -81,46 +81,43 @@ L_take_chair,thought,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,"Alright, I've got the chair, now
 ,,,,,FALSE,FALSE,,,,,,0,
 E_intro,,event,,,FALSE,FALSE,Triggered at the beginning of the scene,,,,,0,
 LR_intro_1,speech,dialogue,RT,,TRUE,FALSE,<alpha=#99>Hey.</color>,,,,,0,
-LR_intro_2,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"Though the woman tries to whisper, dry lungs choke the word to a raspy hiss.",,,,,0,
+LR_intro_2,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"The woman's voice is faint and ragged, just a whisper between her labored breaths.",,,,,0,
 LR_intro_3,speech,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,<alpha=#99><i>Hey.</i></color>,,,,,0,
-LR_intro_4,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,A pause after her second attempt to speak. Labored breaths whistle faintly through bared teeth.,,,,,0,
-LR_intro_5,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"She's about to take her third shot at it when she tenses up, covering her mouth to hold in a coughing fit.",,,,,0,
-LR_intro_6,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"By the time it passes, the wear on her lungs is enough to keep the fourth try at a murmur without effort.",,,,,0,
-LR_intro_7,speech,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,<alpha=#99>Would you-</color>,,,,,0,
-LR_intro_8,action,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,The man beside her jumps like he's been stung as her fist connects with his shoulder.,,,,,0,
-LR_intro_9,speech,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,<b>Listen.</b>,,,,,0,
-LR_intro_10,speech,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,Whuh? What-,,,,,0,
-LR_intro_11,action,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,"Even with the pressure of her knuckles still there, it takes him a second to look around and find her.",,,,,0,
-LR_intro_12,action,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,"As his eyes stumble onto target, the fist lifts away.",,,,,0,
-LR_intro_13,speech,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,<alpha=#99>What'd I-</color>,,,,,0,
-LR_intro_14,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,A finger to the earth.,,,,,0,
-LR_intro_15,speech,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,<alpha=#99>Down.</color>,,,,,0,
-LR_intro_16,action,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,"He knits his brow, and then blinks at the dirt.",,,,,0,
-LR_intro_17,speech,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"<alpha=#99>No, you-</color>",,,,,0,
-LR_intro_18,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"She lunges for a fistful of hair, and leans as much weight on it as she can muster.",,,,,0,
-LR_intro_19,action,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,"It doesn't get much out of him, save for a small jolt of surprise.",,,,,0,
-LR_intro_20,speech,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,<alpha=#99><i>Head. Down.</i></color>,,,,,0,
-LR_intro_21,speech,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,<alpha=#99>But- what if the-</color>,,,,,0,
-LR_intro_22,speech,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"<alpha=#99>What, if they come back? Come back and see your <i>entire head</i> sticking up out of-</color>",,,,,0,
-LR_intro_23,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"She suddenly lets go of his hair, just a moment too late to stifle another rising wave of coughs. Instead, the hand slams down to stop her from tumbling forwards into the dirt.",,,,,0,
-LR_intro_24,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"Until her lungs are satisfied, keeping herself from collapsing is just about all she can manage.",,,,,0,
-LR_intro_25,action,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,"The man moves briefly, as if to speak.",,,,,0,
-LR_intro_26,action,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,"Then, he quietly hunches his head down.",,,,,0,
-LR_intro_27,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"A brief rub at her throat, and the woman waves him off.",,,,,0,
-LR_intro_28,speech,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,Fff- Fuck it. They would have-,,,,,0,
-LR_intro_29,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"She struggles to swallow, shuddering briefly.",,,,,0,
-LR_intro_30,speech,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"-Would have heard that, if they were still here.",,,,,0,
-LR_intro_31,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,Her whole body seems to rattle and heave when she starts to pick herself up.,,,,,0,
-LR_intro_32,action,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,"He lurches forward as she goes, braced to catch her weight.",,,,,0,
-LR_intro_33,speech,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,Are you- You sure you should be...?,,,,,0,
-LR_intro_34,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"Joints pop, and muscles seize. Still, she rises.",,,,,0,
-LR_intro_35,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"As she brings both hands to rest atop the road block, distant highbeams come to dance across a pistol's slide.",,,,,0,
-LR_intro_36,speech,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,Get up and move.,,,,,0,
-LR_intro_37,speech,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,"Right, uh-",,,,,0,
-LR_intro_38,action,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,"The man faintly clears his throat, hustling to stand. Up on his feet, he towers monstrously over her.",,,,,0,
-LR_intro_39,speech,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,Yeah.,,,,,0,
-LR_intro_40,speech,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,<alpha=#99>Er-</color> yes.,,,,,0,
-LR_intro_41,speech,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,"Yes, ma'am.",,,,,0,
+LR_intro_4,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,A pause. She's waiting for a response from the man beside her.,,,,,0,
+LR_intro_5,action,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,"The man doesn't notice - he's just staring over the barrier, watching the road beyond.",,,,,0,
+LR_intro_6,speech,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,<alpha=#99>Would you-</color>,,,,,0,
+LR_intro_7,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"She hurls a fist at his shoulder. It connects with a measly little <i>pat,</i> but it's enough to make him jump.",,,,,0,
+LR_intro_8,speech,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,<b>Listen.</b>,,,,,0,
+LR_intro_9,speech,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,Whuh? What-,,,,,0,
+LR_intro_10,action,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,"Even with her knuckles still pressed against his side, it takes him a second to look around and find her.",,,,,0,
+LR_intro_11,speech,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,<alpha=#99>What'd I-</color>,,,,,0,
+LR_intro_12,speech,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,<alpha=#99><i>Down.</i></color>,,,,,0,
+LR_intro_13,action,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,"He knits his brow, and then blinks at the ground.",,,,,0,
+LR_intro_14,speech,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"<alpha=#99>No, you-</color>",,,,,0,
+LR_intro_15,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"She grabs a lock of his hair, and leans as much weight on it as she can muster.",,,,,0,
+LR_intro_16,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,It isn't much.,,,,,0,
+LR_intro_17,speech,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,<alpha=#99><i>Head. Down.</i></color>,,,,,0,
+LR_intro_18,speech,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,<alpha=#99>But- what if the-</color>,,,,,0,
+LR_intro_19,speech,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"<alpha=#99>What, if they come back? Come back and see your <i>entire head</i> sticking up out of-</color>",,,,,0,
+LR_intro_20,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"Her words falter as she erupts into a violent coughing fit, losing her grip on the man's hair and stumbling over to brace herself against the road block.",,,,,0,
+LR_intro_21,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"Until her lungs are satisfied, keeping herself from collapsing is just about all she can manage.",,,,,0,
+LR_intro_22,action,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,"The man moves briefly, as if to speak.",,,,,0,
+LR_intro_23,action,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,"Then, he quietly hunches down beside the barrier.",,,,,0,
+LR_intro_24,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"Still wheezing from the strain, the woman waves him off.",,,,,0,
+LR_intro_25,speech,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,Fff- Fuck it. They would have-,,,,,0,
+LR_intro_26,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"She struggles to swallow, shuddering briefly.",,,,,0,
+LR_intro_27,speech,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"-Would have heard that, if they were still here.",,,,,0,
+LR_intro_28,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,Her whole body seems to rattle and heave as she tries to stand.,,,,,0,
+LR_intro_29,action,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,"The man lurches forward, too, braced to catch her weight.",,,,,0,
+LR_intro_30,speech,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,"Are you- You sure you're already, uh...?",,,,,0,
+LR_intro_31,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"Still, she rises. Bones pop, and muscles seize.",,,,,0,
+LR_intro_32,action,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,"By the time she's on her feet, the subtle <i>click</i> of her pistol's safety switching off almost sounds natural.",,,,,0,
+LR_intro_33,speech,dialogue,RT,,FALSE,FALSE,Get up and move.,,,,,0,
+LR_intro_34,speech,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,"Right, uh-",,,,,0,
+LR_intro_35,speech,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,<i>Ahem.</i>,,,,,0,
+LR_intro_36,speech,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,Yeah.,,,,,0,
+LR_intro_37,speech,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,<alpha=#99>Er-</color> yes.,,,,,0,
+LR_intro_38,speech,dialogue,LT,,FALSE,FALSE,"Yes, ma'am.",,,,,0,
 ,,,,,FALSE,FALSE,,,,,,0,
 ,,,,,FALSE,FALSE,,,,,,0,
 E_barriers,,event,,,FALSE,FALSE,Triggered when interacting with the highway barriers,,,,,0,