Copyedit (grammar, spelling, etc.) for clarity #568
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- Small grammar, spelling, and punctuation fixes - A few language shifts or additions to further clarity. - Refactored to have one-line per sentence for easier reading/reviewing of diffs.
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Although you may see it spelled with and without spaces, looking at the ODH website it's pretty clear the proper way is "Open Data Hub". This is important whenever it's a proper name, and more important if it's someone's trademarks. Also, consistency and accuracy help create reader comfort.
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Thanks your PR @quaid! 😄
Suggested couple some other minor grammatical changes that I noticed.
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Small grammar, spelling, and language choice fixes as part of a copyedit.
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