Merge pull request #1448 from matkoniecz/rewrite-landing-page-text

Tweak landing page text.
colouring-cities · Nov 25, 2024 · fb1745b · fb1745b
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diff --git a/app/src/frontend/pages/welcome.css b/app/src/frontend/pages/welcome.css
@@ -29,7 +29,13 @@
     height: 4em;
 }
 
+.h3 {
+    font-size: 1.4rem;
+    margin-bottom: 0.75rem;
+}
+
 p {
     font-size: 1rem;
-    word-spacing: 105%;
+    word-spacing: -20%;
+    line-height: 1.5;
 }
diff --git a/app/src/frontend/pages/welcome.tsx b/app/src/frontend/pages/welcome.tsx
@@ -29,17 +29,13 @@ const Welcome = () => (
         <p>
             New data and features are added all the time. We are keen to engage as many people as possible in platform development. 
             Whether you are a resident, or a stakeholder in academia, government, industry or the third sector, any help you can give 
-            colouring in our Colouring Cities maps, and enriching and verifying our open databases with your knowledge, is greatly appreciated.
+            colouring-in our Colouring Cities maps, and enriching and verifying our open databases with your knowledge, is greatly appreciated.
         </p>
         <p>
             All data collected (e.g <a href="/data-extracts.html">data-extracts</a>) 
             and <a href="https://github.com/colouring-cities/colouring-core">code</a> are free to download, 
             use and share under open licence terms. Our <a href="https://github.com/colouring-cities/manual/wiki">
-            open manual</a> provides non-technical information for anyone interested in our research,
-            as well as a <a href="https://github.com/colouring-cities/ccrp-technical-manual/wiki">Technical Manual</a>, 
-            which describes how to use and contribute to the platform.
-            We also have an <a href="https://colouringcities.org/impact-studies">impact studies showcase</a>,
-            which shows how the data from the platform can be used.
+            open manual</a> provides non-technical information for anyone interested in our research. We also have a <a href="https://github.com/colouring-cities/ccrp-technical-manual/wiki">Technical Manual</a>, and an <a href="https://colouringcities.org/impact-studies">Impact Studies Section</a> which shows how the data from the platform can be used.
         </p>
         <Link to="/view/categories"
             className="btn btn-outline-dark btn-lg btn-block">