More health page updates

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 While you're at EMF, our medical team will be available to assist you if you're injured or ill, or if you just need some suncream — just drop by the first aid tent.
 
-If you have an urgent medical issue, call 1099 on the phone system or ask any volunteer with a radio. Please call our medical team instead of dialling 999, as you will get a faster response from our paramedics on site.
+If you have an urgent medical issue, head to the first aid tent, call 1099 on the phone system, or ask any volunteer with a radio. Only dial 999 as a last resort — we have paramedics on site who will get to you quicker.
 
 ## Refund policy
 
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 If you have any respiratory symptoms but have tested negative for COVID, please keep testing every day and wear a mask while you're near other people.
 
-## Food-borne illness
+## Food poisoning
 Outdoor events carry a higher risk of catching food poisoning. We'll provide plenty of places for you to wash your hands, with running water and soap — please wash your hands regularly.
 
 ## Tick bites
 EMF is held in a deer park, which increases the risk of tick bites, especially if you wander off the event site into longer grass.
 
 Tick bites can carry [Lyme disease](https://www.nhs.uk/conditions/lyme-disease/). If you are bitten by a tick, please visit the First Aid tent to have it removed, and be aware of the symptoms of Lyme disease.
 
+## Alcohol
+If you're drinking alcohol, be aware that dehydration worsens its effects and it's easier to get dehydrated when camping outdoors. Make sure you eat regularly and drink plenty of water.
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+Never get so drunk that you cannot take care of yourself if you were to get into a difficult situation. Be aware that our [code of conduct](/code-of-conduct) applies to everyone, and intoxication is not an excuse for bad behaviour.
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 ## Burns
 Camping gas accidents can cause serious burns. Never change gas canisters in or near a tent and make sure the canister is threaded properly before lighting.
 
 ## Hearing damage
 Exposure to loud music can cause damage to your hearing — we provide free earplugs at the Info desk and at Null Sector. Please use them if you don't have your own!
 
 ## Weather
-Please come prepared for all weather! England in early June can be hot and sunny, or cold and rainy, sometimes within hours of each other.
+Please come prepared for all weather! England in early June can be hot and sunny, or cold and rainy, often within hours of each other.
 
-Make sure you drink plenty of water — there are water points across the site and free water is provided at the bars.
+Make sure you drink plenty of water — there are water points across the site and free water is provided at the bars. Bring sunscreen, wear it, and re-apply regularly, even if it's cloudy.
 
 Bring plenty of warm clothing and layers as it can get surprisingly cold at night.