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diff --git a/docs/en/ssi-introduction.rst b/docs/en/ssi-introduction.rst
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ Users possess their digital documents and determine to which actors they present
 
 The main difference between this new approach and the traditional IAM infrastructure is that during the presentation phase there are no intermediaries between the Wallet and the Relying Party, while in the SAML2 or OIDC based infrastructure an Identity Provider is always involved, knowing which services a citizen is accessing to.
 
-Self-Sovereign Identity (SSI) is also significant in the field of data exchange and data governance. This is relevant at both national and European levels, including the new eIDAS Regulation. In fact, it envisions a login option designed for European Users - be they citizens, public administrations, or companies - who want to access another Member State's services using their national authentication systems.
+Digital identity Wallet Architectures are significant in the field of data exchange and data governance. In accordance with the  eIDAS Regulation, a new digital identity paradigm is designed for European Users - be they citizens, public administrations, or companies - who want to access another Member State's services using their national authentication systems.
 
 The main roles in a Wallet ecosystem are are listed as follow:
 

diff --git a/docs/en/trust.rst b/docs/en/trust.rst
@@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ The Trust Anchor Entity Configuration, in addition of the common parameters list
 Entity Configuration Leaves and Intermediates
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-In addition to the previously defined claims, the Entity Configuration of the Leaf and of the Intermediate Entities, MAY contain the parameters listed below:
+In addition to the previously defined claims, the Entity Configuration of the Leaves and of the Intermediate Entities use the following parameters:
 
 
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