Merge pull request #13 from ivoa-std/mcdittmar-rfc2-dal

RFC2: DAL comments
ivoa-std · Jul 27, 2022 · a15be65 · a15be65
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diff --git a/doc/Makefile b/doc/Makefile
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ DOCNAME = Coordinates
 DOCVERSION = 1.0
 
 # Publication date, ISO format; update manually for "releases"
-DOCDATE = 2022-06-21
+DOCDATE = 2022-07-21
 
 # What is it you're writing: NOTE, WD, PR, REC, PEN, or EN
 DOCTYPE = PR

diff --git a/doc/Vocabularies.tex b/doc/Vocabularies.tex
@@ -3,17 +3,17 @@ \section{Standard Vocabularies}
 Quick reference to standard vocabularies used in this model.
 
   \begin{enumerate}
-    \item \textbf{Standard Reference Frame (StdRefFrame)}
+    \item \textbf{Standard Reference Frames (StdRefFrame)}
     \begin{itemize}
       \item[BaseURL:] http://www.ivoa.net/rdf
       \item[Vocabulary:] refframe
     \end{itemize}
-    \item \textbf{Standard Reference Frame (StdRefPos)}
+    \item \textbf{Standard Reference Positions (StdRefPos)}
     \begin{itemize}
       \item[BaseURL:]  http://www.ivoa.net/rdf
       \item[Vocabulary:] refposition
     \end{itemize}
-    \item \textbf{Standard Reference Frame (StdTimeScale)}
+    \item \textbf{Standard Time Scales (StdTimeScale)}
     \begin{itemize}
       \item[BaseURL:]  http://www.ivoa.net/rdf
       \item[Vocabulary:] timescale

diff --git a/doc/history.tex b/doc/history.tex
@@ -5,12 +5,17 @@ \section{Changes from Previous Versions}
 
 % these would be subsections "Changes from v. WD-..."
 % Use itemize environments.
-\subsection{Changes from WD-2019-03-20}
+\subsection{Changes from PR-2022-06-21}
 \begin{itemize} 
-  \item Section 1.2: added clarifying text on the distinction between Quantity, Coordinate, and Measurement in the IVOA models.
-  \item Updated URLs for vocabularies
-  \item Appendix B: changed 'Class' to 'ObjectType' to better align with the VO-DML description.
-  \item Appendix C: brought initial vocabulary content in line with URL content.
+  \item Corrected titles on Vocabulary references in Appendix C.
+  \item Corrected order of listing these history comments (newest first).
+\end{itemize}
+\subsection{Changes from PR-2020-03-10}
+\begin{itemize} 
+  \item Restored Point subclasses: CartesianPoint, LonLatPoint, GenericPoint
+  \item Removed 'default' listing of dependent vocabularies from Appendices.
+  \item Update citation tags for IVOA standards.
+  \item Revision to the Use Case section in response to RFC comments.
 \end{itemize}
 \subsection{Changes from PR-2019-08-30}
 \begin{itemize} 
@@ -21,10 +26,10 @@ \subsection{Changes from PR-2019-08-30}
   \item Corrected URLs for vocabularies ('http' not 'https')
   \item Corrected LaTex for TCG and TCB records to fix display 
 \end{itemize}
-\subsection{Changes from PR-2020-03-10}
+\subsection{Changes from WD-2019-03-20}
 \begin{itemize} 
-  \item Restored Point subclasses: CartesianPoint, LonLatPoint, GenericPoint
-  \item Removed 'default' listing of dependent vocabularies from Appendices.
-  \item Update citation tags for IVOA standards.
-  \item Revision to the Use Case section in response to RFC comments.
+  \item Section 1.2: added clarifying text on the distinction between Quantity, Coordinate, and Measurement in the IVOA models.
+  \item Updated URLs for vocabularies
+  \item Appendix B: changed 'Class' to 'ObjectType' to better align with the VO-DML description.
+  \item Appendix C: brought initial vocabulary content in line with URL content.
 \end{itemize}