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docs/modules/ROOT/pages/clauses/create.adoc

@@ -4,8 +4,7 @@
 
 This page describes how to add a link:https://neo4j.com/docs/cypher-manual/current/clauses/create/[`CREATE`] clause with the `Cypher.Create` class.
 
-To make a `CREATE` clause, first create a valid pattern using the xref:/patterns.adoc[Pattern] class:
-
+To add the clause, first create a valid pattern using the xref:/patterns.adoc[Pattern] class:
 
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@@ -39,8 +38,8 @@ This generates the following `CREATE` clause:
 CREATE (this:Movie {title: "The Matrix"})
 ----
 
-== Relationships
 
+== Relationships
 
 Relationships can be used in a match clause by creating the relevant xref:/patterns.adoc[Pattern]:
 
@@ -62,9 +61,9 @@ CREATE (this1:`Person`)-[this0:ACTED_IN]->(this2:`Movie`)
 
 == Update properties
 
-The clauses `SET` and `REMOVE` can be added with the methods `.set` and `.remove` respectively.
+Add the `SET` and `REMOVE` clauses with the methods `.set` and `.remove` respectively.
 
-`.set` take tuples of 2 elements, the first being the property to update and the second the value:
+`.set` takes a tuple of two elements - a property to update and a new value:
 
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@@ -82,7 +81,6 @@ SET this0.title = $param0
 
 Multiple properties can be updated by passing multiple tuples.
 
-
 `.remove` takes the properties to remove:
 
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docs/modules/ROOT/pages/clauses/foreach.adoc

@@ -4,7 +4,8 @@
 
 This page describes how to create a link:https://neo4j.com/docs/cypher-manual/current/clauses/foreach/[`FOREACH`] clause using the `Cypher.Foreach` class.
 
-A `Foreach` clause takes a single variable to be used in a loop. The methods `.in` and `.do` are used to defined the list and update clauses:
+A `Foreach` clause takes a single variable to be used in a loop.
+Use the `.in` and `.do` methods to define the list and update clauses:
 
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docs/modules/ROOT/pages/clauses/load-csv.adoc

@@ -2,7 +2,8 @@
 :description: This page describes how to create `LOAD CSV` clauses.
 = Load CSV
 
-This page describes how to create link:https://neo4j.com/docs/cypher-manual/current/clauses/load-csv/[`LOAD CSV`] clauses in Cypher with Cypher Builder. To achieve this, use the `LoadCSV` class:
+This page describes how to create link:https://neo4j.com/docs/cypher-manual/current/clauses/load-csv/[`LOAD CSV`] clauses in Cypher with Cypher Builder.
+To achieve this, use the `LoadCSV` class:
 
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docs/modules/ROOT/pages/clauses/match.adoc

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
 This page describes how to create a link:https://neo4j.com/docs/cypher-manual/current/clauses/match/[`MATCH`] clause with the `Cypher.Match` class.
 
-To create a `MATCH` clause, first create a valid pattern using the xref:/patterns.adoc[Pattern] class and pass it to `Match` constructor:
+To add the clause, first create a valid pattern using the xref:/patterns.adoc[Pattern] class and pass it to the `Match` constructor:
 
 
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@@ -23,7 +23,8 @@ This generates the following `MATCH` clause:
 MATCH (this:Movie)
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-Afterwards, other clauses can be added. For example:
+Afterwards, other clauses can be added.
+For example:
 
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@@ -32,16 +33,17 @@ const matchQuery = new Cypher.Match(pattern)
     .return(movie);
 ----
 
-Extra match clauses can also be chained:
+You can also chain extra match clauses:
 
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 const matchQuery = new Cypher.Match(pattern).match(pattern2).return(movie)
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+
 == Relationships
 
-Relationships can be used in a match clause by creating the relevant xref:/patterns.adoc[Pattern]:
+You can use relationships in a match clause by creating the relevant xref:/patterns.adoc[Pattern]:
 
 
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@@ -58,6 +60,7 @@ const matchQuery = new Cypher.Match(actedInPattern)
 MATCH (this0:Person)-[:ACTED_IN]->(this1:Movie)
 ----
 
+
 == Filtering with `WHERE`
 
 A `WHERE` clause can be appended with the `.where` method, this accepts any predicate:
@@ -74,7 +77,7 @@ MATCH (this0:Movie)
 WHERE title = $param0
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-Multiple predicates can be chained by using the `.and` or `.where` method after `.where`:
+You can chain multiple predicates by using the `.and` or `.where` method after `.where`:
 
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@@ -90,9 +93,10 @@ WHERE this0.title = $param0
 AND this0.year <> $param1
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+
 === Logical filters
 
-For more complex logical filters, the predicates `Cypher.and`, `Cypher.or`, `Cypher.not` and `Cypher.xor` can be used inside `where`:
+For more complex logical filters, use the `Cypher.and`, `Cypher.or`, `Cypher.not` and `Cypher.xor` predicates inside `where`:
 
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@@ -111,6 +115,7 @@ MATCH (this0:Movie)
 WHERE ((this0.title = $param0 OR this0.year > $param1) AND this0.year <> $param2)
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+
 === Filtering properties shorthand
 
 `.where` also supports passing a variable and an object with variables to check for equality of multiple values in a more concise way:
@@ -130,7 +135,7 @@ WHERE (this0.id = $param0 AND this0.name = $param1)
 
 == Optional match
 
-The clause link:https://neo4j.com/docs/cypher-manual/current/clauses/optional-match/[`OPTIONAL MATCH`] can be created in the same manner as `MATCH` by using the class `Cypher.OptionalMatch`:
+You can create the clause link:https://neo4j.com/docs/cypher-manual/current/clauses/optional-match/[`OPTIONAL MATCH`] similarly to `MATCH` by using the class `Cypher.OptionalMatch`:
 
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@@ -140,7 +145,7 @@ const pattern = new Cypher.Pattern(movie, { labels: ["Movie"] });
 const matchQuery = new Cypher.OptionalMatch(pattern);
 ----
 
-Alternatively, an existing `Match` instance can be transformed into an `OptionalMatch` with the method `.optional()`:
+Alternatively, you can transform an existing `Match` instance into an `OptionalMatch` with the method `.optional()`:
 
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@@ -150,9 +155,10 @@ const pattern = new Cypher.Pattern(movie, { labels: ["Movie"] });
 const matchQuery = new Cypher.Match(pattern).optional();
 ----
 
+
 == Shortest paths
 
-link:https://neo4j.com/docs/cypher-manual/current/patterns/shortest-paths/#shortest[Shortest paths] and its variations can be added in a Match clause with the following methods in `Cypher.Match`:
+You can add link:https://neo4j.com/docs/cypher-manual/current/patterns/shortest-paths/#shortest[Shortest paths] and its variations in a Match clause with the following methods in `Cypher.Match`:
 
 * `.shortest(k)`
 * `.shortestGroups(k)`

docs/modules/ROOT/pages/clauses/merge.adoc

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
 This page describes how to create a link:https://neo4j.com/docs/cypher-manual/current/clauses/merge/[`MERGE`] clause with the `Cypher.Merge` class.
 
-To create a `Merge` clause, first create a valid pattern using the xref:/patterns.adoc[Pattern] class and pass it to `Merge` constructor:
+To add a `Merge` clause, first create a valid pattern using the xref:/patterns.adoc[Pattern] class and pass it to `Merge` constructor:
 
 
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@@ -24,7 +24,8 @@ This generates the following `MERGE` clause:
 MERGE (this:Movie)-[:ACTED_IN]->(this1)
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-Afterwards, other clauses can be added. For example:
+Afterwards, you can add other clauses.
+For example:
 
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@@ -40,9 +41,10 @@ WHERE this.name = $param1
 return this
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-== On Create / On Match
+== `ON CREATE` and `ON MATCH`
 
-A `MERGE` statement can be followed by `ON CREATE SET` and `ON MATCH SET`, this can be achieved with the methods `onCreateSet` and `onMatchSet` respectively:
+`ON CREATE SET` and `ON MATCH SET` can follow a `MERGE` statement.
+You can achieve this with the methods `onCreateSet` and `onMatchSet` respectively:
 
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docs/modules/ROOT/pages/clauses/return.adoc

@@ -4,7 +4,8 @@
 
 This page describes how to create a link:https://neo4j.com/docs/cypher-manual/current/clauses/return/[`RETURN`] clause with the `Cypher.Return` class.
 
-Return clauses can be created with `new Cypher.Return`, but more commonly they are created after an existing clause, such as `MATCH`, by using the method `.return`.
+You can add return clauses with `new Cypher.Return`.
+However, more commonly they are added after an existing clause, such as `MATCH`, by using the method `.return`.
 In both cases, the return variables can be passed as parameters: 
 
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@@ -27,16 +28,16 @@ Any expression can be passed to return, for example a function:
 const returnQuery = new Cypher.Return(Cypher.round(new Cypher.Param(2.3)));
 ----
 
-Which translates to:
+This translates to:
 
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 RETURN round($param1)
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-## Aliasing results
+== Aliasing results
 
-Results can be aliased by using an array with two elements - the variable and the aliased name, which can be a string or a variable:
+You can alias results by using an array with two elements - the variable and the aliased name, which can be a string or a variable:
 
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@@ -51,9 +52,9 @@ This generates the following clause:
 RETURN this0 AS my-node
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-## Unique results
+== Unique results
 
-`DISTINCT` can be added to `RETURN` by using the `.distinct` method:
+Add `DISTINCT` to `RETURN` by using the `.distinct` method:
 
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docs/modules/ROOT/pages/clauses/set.adoc

@@ -2,13 +2,13 @@
 :description: This page describes how to create `SET` clauses.
 = Set
 
-This page describes how to create link:https://neo4j.com/docs/cypher-manual/current/clauses/set/[`SET`] clauses. `SET` statements are appended to an a clause with the method `.set`.
+This page describes how to create link:https://neo4j.com/docs/cypher-manual/current/clauses/set/[`SET`] clauses.
+Append `SET` statements to a clause with the method `.set`.
 
 
 == Update properties with `SET`
 
-The `.set` method is used to update xref:../variables-and-params/variables.adoc#_properties[properties] of a node or relationship.
-
+You can update xref:../variables-and-params/variables.adoc#_properties[properties] of a node or relationship with the `.set` method.
 For example, to update the properties of a node:
 
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@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ const matchQuery = new Cypher.Match(new Cypher.Pattern(personNode, { labels: ["P
 );
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-This will generate the following Cypher:
+This generates the following Cypher:
 
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@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ SET
 RETURN this0
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-Multiple pairs of property-expression can be passed to update multiple properties:
+You can pass multiple pairs of property expressions to update multiple properties:
 
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@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ const matchQuery = new Cypher.Match(new Cypher.Pattern(personNode, { labels: ["P
 );
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-This will generate the following Cypher:
+This generates the following Cypher:
 
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@@ -56,7 +56,8 @@ RETURN this0
 
 === Use `SET` to replace all node properties
 
-To update all the properties of a node or relationship, instead of a property, pass the variable directly as the first element of the array. The second element must be a `Cypher.Map` or a variable:
+To update all the properties of a node or relationship, instead of a property, pass the variable directly as the first element of the array.
+The second element must be a `Cypher.Map` or a variable:
 
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@@ -70,7 +71,7 @@ const matchQuery = new Cypher.Match(new Cypher.Pattern(personNode, { labels: ["P
 ]);
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-This generates the Cypher:
+This generates the following Cypher:
 
 
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@@ -97,7 +98,8 @@ SET
     this1 = this0
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-==== Using operator `+=`
+
+==== The `+=` operator
 
 When passing a map to update a node properties with `SET`, it is possible to use the operator `+=` to add new properties, instead of replacing them:
 
@@ -113,7 +115,7 @@ const matchQuery = new Cypher.Match(new Cypher.Pattern(personNode, { labels: ["P
 ]);
 ----
 
-This generates the cypher:
+This generates the following Cypher:
 
 
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@@ -124,7 +126,7 @@ SET
 ----
 
 
+== `SET` with labels
 
-== Set with labels
-
-Set can be used to update the labels of a node or the type of a relationship. More information on xref:../../how-to/update-labels.adoc#_add_labels[How to update labels].
+You can use `SET` to update the labels of a node or the type of a relationship.
+For more information, see xref:../../how-to/update-labels.adoc#_add_labels[How to update labels].

docs/modules/ROOT/pages/clauses/union.adoc

@@ -4,7 +4,8 @@
 
 This page describes how to create link:https://neo4j.com/docs/cypher-manual/current/clauses/union/[`UNION`] clauses with the `Cypher.Union` class.
 
-A union between multiple queries can be created by passing multiple clauses into a `Cypher.Union` class to combine them. Note that all clauses must be different instances, as Cypher Builder clauses cannot be reused:
+Create a union between multiple queries by passing multiple clauses to the `Cypher.Union` class to combine them.
+Note that all clauses must be different instances, as Cypher Builder clauses cannot be reused:
 
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@@ -35,10 +36,11 @@ RETURN this3 AS var1
 
 Note that this example uses the extra variable `returnVar` to make sure that all the queries return the same variable name.
 
+
 == Union all
 
 Unions remove duplicates by default.
-To keep all the results, use the `.all()` method to create a `UNION ALL` clause instead:
+To keep all results, use the `.all()` method to create a `UNION ALL` clause instead:
 
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docs/modules/ROOT/pages/clauses/use.adoc

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
 This page describes how to create a link:https://neo4j.com/docs/cypher-manual/current/clauses/use/[`USE`] clause with the `Cypher.Use` class.
 
-To create an `Use` clause, you can pass an existing query to `Cypher.use` to prepend an `USE` statement before the query:
+To create an `Use` clause, pass an existing query to `Cypher.use` to prepend a `USE` statement before the query:
 
 
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