disambiguation of two sentences after review by the chairs

w3c · Oct 28, 2024 · 37dcacd · 37dcacd
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@@ -79,13 +79,13 @@ <h1 id="title"><i class="todo">DRAFT</i> Patents &amp; Standards Interest Group
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       <p>
-      PSIG may suggest further policy development and draft documents for such additional policies. <span class="todo">Any policy development would be subject to review by the Advisory Board, the Advisory Committee and may also be submitted for review by the Board of Directors at the discretion of PSIG, the W3C Team, the Advisory Board or the Advisory Committee review.</span>
+      PSIG may suggest further policy development and draft documents for such additional policies. Any policy development would be subject to review by the Advisory Board and the Advisory Committee, and may also be submitted for review by the Board of Directors at the discretion of PSIG, the W3C Team, the Advisory Board or the Advisory Committee.
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       <!-- the link to the group is ALWAYS that available from https://www.w3.org/groups/wg or https://www.w3.org/groups/ig because each group page can then point to a different homepage, but not the other way around. -->
 
 
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-        <p class="join"><a href="https://www.w3.org/groups/wg/[shortname]/join">Join the Patents &amp; Standards Interest Group.</a><span class="todo">Diff to redline, make URI</span></p>
+        <p class="join"><a href="https://www.w3.org/groups/wg/[shortname]/join">Join the Patents &amp; Standards Interest Group.</a></p>
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       <!-- delete the GH link after AC review completed -->
@@ -201,8 +201,8 @@ <h2>Scope</h2>
         The W3C Team, the Advisory Board, the Advisory Committee, and the Board of Directors may request that the PSIG provide feedback regarding the W3C Patent Policy, issues related to patent commitments for participants in current and proposed W3C activities (for example, continuous development), and other IPR issues. The PSIG may also exchange views and flag issues regarding the W3C Patent Policy. It may produce non-binding Interest Group Notes on those specific issues.
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-      <p class="todo">
-      The PSIG will review and may suggest changes to, but is not responsible for formally documenting or implementing, W3C IPR policies.
+      <p>
+        The PSIG will review and may suggest changes to W3C IPR policies, but is not responsible for formally documenting or implementing them.
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