Merge pull request #22 from w3c/upsate-based-on-himorin-comments

update draft Charter based on Himori's comments

draft-charter/index.html

@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@ <h3>Follow-up discussion during the TPAC 2022 breakout, etc.</h3>
         <ul>
             <li>ECHONET</li>
             <li>IEC SC3D</li>
-            <li>IPA DADC</li>
+            <li>IPA (Information-technology Promotion Agency, Japan) DADC</li>
             <li>ISO/IEC JTC1 WG11</li>
             <li>ITU-T SG20</li>
             <li>OGC (Open Geospaital Consortium)</li>
@@ -254,16 +254,17 @@ <h4>W3C Web of Things</h4>
         <figcaption>Interconnection of IoT platforms using WoT as a hub</figcaption>
         </figure>
 
-         <p>WoT standards are now being used for various industry areas including the following:/p>
+         <p>WoT standards are now being used for various industry areas including the following:</p>
          <dl>
              <dt>Smart home (collaboratively with ECHONET)</dt>
              <dd>Improve the usability of home appliances for device users by allowing device users to configure the operation modes of all devices at home without configuring those devices one by one when they leave and come home.</dd>
 
              <dt>Smart building (collaboratively with IPA DADC)</dt>
              <dd>Integrate various sensor networks and various devices by WoT within a smart building which use different data models and protocols.</dd>
 
-             <dt>Smart factory (collaboratively with OPC UA)</dt>
+             <dt>Smart factory (collaboratively with OPC Foundation's OPC UA (Uivied Architecture))</dt>
              <dd>A bottling line consists of a filling module, a capping module, a labeling module, and a transport system. The production line is provided via an OPC UA endpoint for control and monitoring purposes.</dd>
+         </dl>
 
 
              <h3>Related SDO's work</h3>
@@ -623,8 +624,9 @@ <h3 id="external-coordination">External Organizations</h3>
             <dt class="coord-org">FIWARE</dt><dd>open-source implementations of open standard like NGSI-LD in partnership with ETSI, etc.</dd>
             <dt class="coord-org">ECLASS</dt><dd>standardized taxonomy, terminology and semantics for smart cities</dd>
             <dt class="coord-org">ECHONET</dt><dd>smart homes</dd>
-            <dt class="coord-org">IPA DADC</dt><dd>smart buildings</dd>
+            <dt class="coord-org">IPA (Information-technology Promotion Agency, Japan) DADC</dt><dd>smart buildings</dd>
             <dt class="coord-org">DTPR</dt><dd>foundation for transparency, legibility and accountability of digital technology in built environment</dd>
+            <dt class="coord-org">OPC Foundation</dt><dd>smart devices and privacy management</dd>
           </dl></dd>
 
           <dt class="coord-category">Economic Unions and Communities (not limited to but including the following):</dt>
@@ -671,7 +673,7 @@ <h2 id="participation">
           The group also welcomes non-Members to contribute technical submissions for consideration upon their agreement to the terms of the <a href="https://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy/">W3C Patent Policy</a>.
         </p>
         <p>Participants in the group are required (by the <a href="https://www.w3.org/Consortium/Process/#ParticipationCriteria">W3C Process</a>) to follow the
-          W3C <a href="https://www.w3.org/Consortium/cepc/">Code of Ethics and Professional Conduct</a>.</p>
+          W3C <a href="https://www.w3.org/Consortium/cepc/">Code of Conduct</a>.</p>
       </section>
 
 
@@ -692,7 +694,7 @@ <h2>
         </p>
         <p>
           This group primarily conducts its technical work
-          on <a class="todo" id="public-github" href="[link to Github repo]">GitHub issues@@@</a>.
+          on <a class="todo" id="public-github" href="https://github.com/w3c/smartcities-workshop/issues">GitHub issues (LINK To be updated)</a>.
           The public is invited to review, discuss and contribute to this work.
         </p>
         <p>
@@ -719,7 +721,7 @@ <h2>
           If no objections are raised by the end of the response period, the resolution will be considered to have consensus as a resolution of the Interest Group.
         </p>
         <p>
-          All decisions made by the group should be considered resolved unless and until new information becomes available or unless reopened at the discretion of the Chairs or the Director.
+          All decisions made by the group should be considered resolved unless and until new information becomes available or unless reopened at the discretion of the Chairs.
         </p>
         <p>
           This charter is written in accordance with the <a href="https://www.w3.org/Consortium/Process/#Votes">W3C Process Document (Section 5.2.3, Deciding by Vote)</a> and includes no voting procedures beyond what the Process Document requires.