Fix grammar in legal processes and coercion section.

Co-authored-by: Ted Thibodeau Jr <[email protected]>

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@@ -5424,7 +5424,7 @@ <h3>The Principle of Data Minimization</h3>
         <p>
 Implementers of software used by [=holders=] are urged to disclose what
 information is being requested by a [=verifier=], such that a [=holder=] can
-push back on the over-collection of information that is unnecessary for the
+decline to share specific requested information that is unnecessary for the
 transaction. Additionally, logs of information shared with [=verifiers=] are
 strongly encouraged to be available to [=holders=] such that the information
 might be shared with authorities if a [=holder=] believes that they are a
@@ -5772,16 +5772,16 @@ <h3>Usage Patterns</h3>
         <h3>Legal Processes</h3>
 
         <p>
-It is possible, through legal processes, for private information to be compelled
-to be disclosed to authorities, such as law enforcement, by [=issuers=],
-[=holders=], and/or [=verifiers=]. It is also possible for the same private
+It is possible, through legal processes, for [=issuers=], [=holders=], and/or
+[=verifiers=] to be compelled to disclose private information to authorities,
+such as law enforcement. It is also possible for the same private
 information to be accidentally disclosed to an unauthorized party through a
 software bug or security failure. Authors of legal processes and compliance
 regimes are advised to draft guidelines that notify the [=subjects=] involved
 when their private information is purposefully or accidentally disclosed to a
 third party. Providers of software services are advised to be transparent about
-who and under what circumstances that private information might be shared with a
-third party.
+known circumstances that might cause such private information to be shared with
+a third party, and about the identity of any such third party.
         </p>
       </section>